Museum

4 年前

 
Hello! I am creating an audio guide for English speakers who come to visit the Hetmanship museum in Kyiv, Ukraine. My intention is to make the perfect text that would be comfortable for the natives to understand. Could you have a look at this description and change or correct the things that you think are not natural.
Thank you!
"The first exposition stand includes a fragment of an engraving called «Mohyla Collegium Students» by Ivan Szczyrsky; the photo of a portrait of the Polish King John II Casimir; the portraits of the Ukrainian Hetmans Petro Doroshenko and Ivan Samoilovich.
 Next to it, on the platform, there are household items (archaeological finds) used by rural residents at the end of 17th – first half of the 18th century." (see the picture in the first comment)